ext_1531 ([identity profile] ravenclaw-devi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] koilungfish 2007-05-11 11:42 pm (UTC)

Heh!

Yeah, I too think you brought it across rather well - the Decepticons here are bastards, certainly, but they don't like mass-slaughtering aliens that can't fight back much because it's just - boring?

You may want to fix this sentence, though - They will die with amongst the ruins of our ruination. (Specifically, the "die with amongst" - there is either a word too many or a few words too few.)

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