I like this, both the description of Ravage's mind/emotions, and that of the surroundings. I could practically smell the ground under his paws.
Small nitpick, though: "He had followed its voice, its paw-prints, the torn soil thrown up when it found ground firm enough to run, the heaved-up boulders where it had rooted for something Ravage could not identity." - shouldn't it be "identify"?
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Date: 2007-08-24 11:16 am (UTC)Small nitpick, though: "He had followed its voice, its paw-prints, the torn soil thrown up when it found ground firm enough to run, the heaved-up boulders where it had rooted for something Ravage could not identity." - shouldn't it be "identify"?