It was worse at 5 am. Now I have a little perspective, which improves matters greatly.
I didn't want to put any texture on the prose, since it is simply a repetition of something that actually happened [viz, the dream I had]. It doesn't need atmospheric adjectives, it's bad enough on its own!
Which era? I just wrote it down as it was/is/I remember it. Perhaps I think in old-fashioned words? ;)
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Date: 2007-08-22 02:49 pm (UTC)It was worse at 5 am. Now I have a little perspective, which improves matters greatly.
I didn't want to put any texture on the prose, since it is simply a repetition of something that actually happened [viz, the dream I had]. It doesn't need atmospheric adjectives, it's bad enough on its own!
Which era? I just wrote it down as it was/is/I remember it. Perhaps I think in old-fashioned words? ;)