You have a touch for classic horror, I see. So much character and sinisterness suggested just from dialogue. Your characters come across as classic British out in the backwaters of the Empire, late 19th or early 20th c.--is that intended? A. Conan Doyle or H. G. Wells-flavor, if you know what I mean.
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Date: 2007-01-09 05:17 pm (UTC)You have a touch for classic horror, I see. So much character and sinisterness suggested just from dialogue. Your characters come across as classic British out in the backwaters of the Empire, late 19th or early 20th c.--is that intended? A. Conan Doyle or H. G. Wells-flavor, if you know what I mean.
A suggestion: for web display, format your paragraphs as blocks separated by a blank line. It's more readable, and it's the standard for web publication.