Hmmmm, points for keeping dialogue insistant. But their speech pattern is so similiar that I have to read very carefully to understand who is saying what.
I like how you have Soundwave being perverted, keeping and using Cybertronian sex toys >:) Adds a whole dimension to his character rarely seen in fics.
Uhhhh, hmmm thumbs up or thumbs down. . . .?
Thumbs up because the writing is good and the dialogue consistant. First time I've seen a pairing between Soundwave and Shockwave and I like it.
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Date: 2008-02-15 01:34 am (UTC)I like how you have Soundwave being perverted, keeping and using Cybertronian sex toys >:) Adds a whole dimension to his character rarely seen in fics.
Uhhhh, hmmm thumbs up or thumbs down. . . .?
Thumbs up because the writing is good and the dialogue consistant. First time I've seen a pairing between Soundwave and Shockwave and I like it.