http://aragem.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aragem.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] koilungfish 2008-02-15 01:34 am (UTC)

Hmmmm, points for keeping dialogue insistant. But their speech pattern is so similiar that I have to read very carefully to understand who is saying what.

I like how you have Soundwave being perverted, keeping and using Cybertronian sex toys >:) Adds a whole dimension to his character rarely seen in fics.

Uhhhh, hmmm thumbs up or thumbs down. . . .?

Thumbs up because the writing is good and the dialogue consistant. First time I've seen a pairing between Soundwave and Shockwave and I like it.


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