Hmm, I've seen a lot of joking about the S*waves being married.
I don't quite share the 'utter loser' outlook you seem to take on Soundwave. (Marvel comics, yo. Soundwave rocks there. Recording his convincing speech prior to a fight, because he knows he won't be able to say it then?)
I mean, I think it's probably a valid take on him, but it's not how I would interpret him. It is a decent change from Soundwave the saint, I suppose.
The speech does feel off, as others have noted. In fact, I was reminded of Omega Supreme's speech pattern. Being reminded of a third character's speech pattern when reading a seperate two gets really confusing.
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Date: 2008-02-16 01:37 pm (UTC)I don't quite share the 'utter loser' outlook you seem to take on Soundwave. (Marvel comics, yo. Soundwave rocks there. Recording his convincing speech prior to a fight, because he knows he won't be able to say it then?)
I mean, I think it's probably a valid take on him, but it's not how I would interpret him. It is a decent change from Soundwave the saint, I suppose.
The speech does feel off, as others have noted. In fact, I was reminded of Omega Supreme's speech pattern. Being reminded of a third character's speech pattern when reading a seperate two gets really confusing.
The ending is amusing but a bit trite.
The fic's good for a chuckle and a smirk, anyway.