ext_24760 ([identity profile] vivian-shaw.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] koilungfish 2008-03-08 05:32 pm (UTC)

Oh fuck me with a sixteen-phase MAR, don't leave them there.

I love, love, the way you've set all this up as completely routine and rote, and the insights you've given into how Soundwave thinks when he's doing routine and rote things with a different part of his mind; how the sound-surfing appeals. And I love the soaked-in aura of old ghosts, old signals still on the air: radio is haunted.

The Bermuda Triangle isn't something I'd have thought of doing to him, but it really works, and the effect is exactly as eerie as the reports I've read of last-known transmissions from lost aircraft. The counting makes me think again of the King short story 1408 as well as the shortwave number stations.
Truly excellent.

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