ext_1531 ([identity profile] ravenclaw-devi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] koilungfish 2008-03-29 08:33 am (UTC)

Interesting - I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. I especially like how you've written the interaction between the Autobots.

then switched off his electro-disrupted

You meant "electro-disruptor," right?
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