Well, it wasn't going anywhere, and it's a year old now, so I just dumped. I have a few more in similar situations. Yeah, there'll be some weak lines. This is all first-to-second draft stuff, not very polished at all.
I don't see how a TF *could* blush like a human. Lack of capillaries, sort of thing. Seaspray blushed in the cartoon, but that was his whole face going red, like the metal heated up or something.
It's not so much that Megatron's OOC, since we see him being, err, canonically OOC in "Microbots". It's just that drunken Megatron - whilst in character for Megatron whilst he's drunk - is not as interesting as Megatron when he's sober. It makes for an interesting contrast but not for much of a story. Leastways, not here.
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Date: 2008-08-01 12:08 pm (UTC)I don't see how a TF *could* blush like a human. Lack of capillaries, sort of thing. Seaspray blushed in the cartoon, but that was his whole face going red, like the metal heated up or something.
It's not so much that Megatron's OOC, since we see him being, err, canonically OOC in "Microbots". It's just that drunken Megatron - whilst in character for Megatron whilst he's drunk - is not as interesting as Megatron when he's sober. It makes for an interesting contrast but not for much of a story. Leastways, not here.