I think it's less that he doesn't believe it's there [since it very definitely is, and won't fuck off no matter what anyone does] but more that he believes it is all-deceiving, never presenting an honest, sincere or benign face ... so ... basically ... he thinks all Chaos is Tzeentch.
But he has! :D
So you have found a Chaos Chick Tract. The writer just needs to come out of the amorphous tentacled closet and embrace his chaosness.
Also, I like that you pegged on the character not even knowing why he was doing things. It really bothers me when that happens in fiction, through what amounts to the character having read the script ahead of time and thus knowing exactly what to do. I had the same problem with 9 a few days ago.
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Date: 2009-10-13 12:55 pm (UTC)But he has! :D
So you have found a Chaos Chick Tract. The writer just needs to come out of the amorphous tentacled closet and embrace his chaosness.
Also, I like that you pegged on the character not even knowing why he was doing things. It really bothers me when that happens in fiction, through what amounts to the character having read the script ahead of time and thus knowing exactly what to do. I had the same problem with 9 a few days ago.