Don't like martyrMegs, but I do love the delving into Cybertronian religions. Perhaps this could have been used during a different fic, there have been other truces, or opportunities for such. Also, I love how well thought out your Koipedia was on religions and languages, LOVED reading every second of it
*dances around* Xaaron! Xaaron makes EVERYTHING better, even if it's just a case of referenced by proxy! ^^ Perhaps the 'Emirate of Primus' is related to both making him the opposite of Builder-tied Trion and his later 'avatar of primus' status?
I like the con slogan, but again, I do think much of this would have been better served in a seperate fic, as it is very interesting and does advance the characters, however it doesn't quite fit in the 'time limit/elder god' plot and slows the travel time down (sorry)
Interesting development on Megatron, and this does fit in to this concept, and without the proceeding (and some of the following) truce 'talks' would fit well in the 'time liiiiiiiiiii-miiiiiiiiiiit' subplot going on.
oooooooooo, more info! I like the idea of Dust, junk and Skyscraper psychoses! Not sure I agree with how you portrayed the cons in this sequence, but I like that overpopulation became a problem for them, and some of the side effects that occurred.
*nods* You are right about Megatron being the movivating point and pivoing point of the war. Again, I'm not sure if this argument (and Optimus reveal/you rebuilt me) really fits in here, however it would have to be included somewhere in Landwaster in order to lay the groundwork down for the 'Guardian' reveal at the end.
Again, I want to restate that I like the idea of one of the reasons, though hardly the only one, that Megatron kept Screamer around was to have Starscream pilot a 'warworld'
"Just as the sun goes down behind the mountains, so too shall we go down. Hand-in-hand and singing shall we go down into the darkness, and the mysteries of Cybertron shall be revealed to us. We will go down into the dark, and dwell forever in the place beyond the end of time," Prime recited. No idea what's up either, but niiiiiice use of language and a rather poetic flair.
Hmmm, interesting. I'd noticed that in the comics (and to a lesser extent the cartoon) that Optimus seemed to dislike and almost fear the seekers/flyers the most (and that was likely the cause for how poorly he treats the Aerialbots in comic-canon). I see I'm not the only one to notice it? For some reason, Optimus fears/hates Vosians, more than he even hates Megatron. Such a fun bit of oddness to try and sort out a back story for ^^ Also, I like that treachary is considered 'normal', it's one of the elements of the Decepticons from your koipedia and fics that I really love, and find really fitting to the Decepticons. (Bab5! YAY!!)
Hmmm, I like the interaction with Prime and Megatron over the dinobots, although I think Megatron is erring into uberland again, while yes he's more experianced, Grimlock is a powerhouse and he has beaten Megatron before (I think... I re-read the comics more often than I rewatch the series...)
Cthulhu!! squeee!! prt4
Don't like martyrMegs, but I do love the delving into Cybertronian religions. Perhaps this could have been used during a different fic, there have been other truces, or opportunities for such. Also, I love how well thought out your Koipedia was on religions and languages, LOVED reading every second of it
*dances around* Xaaron! Xaaron makes EVERYTHING better, even if it's just a case of referenced by proxy! ^^ Perhaps the 'Emirate of Primus' is related to both making him the opposite of Builder-tied Trion and his later 'avatar of primus' status?
I like the con slogan, but again, I do think much of this would have been better served in a seperate fic, as it is very interesting and does advance the characters, however it doesn't quite fit in the 'time limit/elder god' plot and slows the travel time down (sorry)
Interesting development on Megatron, and this does fit in to this concept, and without the proceeding (and some of the following) truce 'talks' would fit well in the 'time liiiiiiiiiii-miiiiiiiiiiit' subplot going on.
oooooooooo, more info! I like the idea of Dust, junk and Skyscraper psychoses! Not sure I agree with how you portrayed the cons in this sequence, but I like that overpopulation became a problem for them, and some of the side effects that occurred.
*nods* You are right about Megatron being the movivating point and pivoing point of the war. Again, I'm not sure if this argument (and Optimus reveal/you rebuilt me) really fits in here, however it would have to be included somewhere in Landwaster in order to lay the groundwork down for the 'Guardian' reveal at the end.
Again, I want to restate that I like the idea of one of the reasons, though hardly the only one, that Megatron kept Screamer around was to have Starscream pilot a 'warworld'
"Just as the sun goes down behind the mountains, so too shall we go down. Hand-in-hand and singing shall we go down into the darkness, and the mysteries of Cybertron shall be revealed to us. We will go down into the dark, and dwell forever in the place beyond the end of time," Prime recited. No idea what's up either, but niiiiiice use of language and a rather poetic flair.
Hmmm, interesting. I'd noticed that in the comics (and to a lesser extent the cartoon) that Optimus seemed to dislike and almost fear the seekers/flyers the most (and that was likely the cause for how poorly he treats the Aerialbots in comic-canon). I see I'm not the only one to notice it? For some reason, Optimus fears/hates Vosians, more than he even hates Megatron. Such a fun bit of oddness to try and sort out a back story for ^^ Also, I like that treachary is considered 'normal', it's one of the elements of the Decepticons from your koipedia and fics that I really love, and find really fitting to the Decepticons. (Bab5! YAY!!)
Hmmm, I like the interaction with Prime and Megatron over the dinobots, although I think Megatron is erring into uberland again, while yes he's more experianced, Grimlock is a powerhouse and he has beaten Megatron before (I think... I re-read the comics more often than I rewatch the series...)