Hmm, you're probably right there. It's hard to get all the necessary details into a fight scene, especially one that's supposed to move fast, and I tend towards long sentences and long words naturally. Will bear that in mind next time. Very good point.
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Date: 2007-03-30 08:40 pm (UTC)No, I didn't. Damn.
Also; bloodthirsty Scavenger. Yay?