Rah. That was rather the point, in as much as there was one.
Yes, I wrote this piece whilst on autopilot, and it shows. I don't think I was firing on any cylinders, let alone all of then, hence my comment about using too many stock phrases, and why the repitition is grinding.
Nah, I'm getting rather fond of Bluestreak, if only because he's a relatively neutral observer inside the Autobots.
Good question. Perhaps this is why we never see Mirage in a river.
Yes, it should be, darn.
Might or might not. I've noticed TFs don't seem to personify things much, so perhaps not. On the other hand, the "bright line" phrase is one I need to stop using because I've overworked it so far.
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Date: 2007-04-11 10:47 am (UTC)Yes, I wrote this piece whilst on autopilot, and it shows. I don't think I was firing on any cylinders, let alone all of then, hence my comment about using too many stock phrases, and why the repitition is grinding.
Nah, I'm getting rather fond of Bluestreak, if only because he's a relatively neutral observer inside the Autobots.
Good question. Perhaps this is why we never see Mirage in a river.
Yes, it should be, darn.
Might or might not. I've noticed TFs don't seem to personify things much, so perhaps not. On the other hand, the "bright line" phrase is one I need to stop using because I've overworked it so far.