ext_211081 ([identity profile] sapphirebreeze.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] koilungfish 2007-04-09 07:50 pm (UTC)

I do like this better than "Quiet" pt 1. Giving them the opportunity to talk is about as much a relief for the reader as for Bluestreak, methinks. :)

No real strong emotional reaction beyond, "Okay, better than last." No strong reaction in general. It might make for a good scene in a larger fic, but doesn't exactly stand on its own (but then, I get the feeling you're already aware of that).

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