T'is nice to be able to hit this level after not writing for three weeks. At least I can be basically competent even if my mental cohesion is at a low ebb.
It is an odd sentence, I agree. I'm really not sure what the "dry as memories" bit means. I will revise it should this actually become a story rather than an aggregate of pieces.
Yes. The silence is oppressive, but loud noises mean possibly being shot at, so it's a bit six of one, half a dozen of the other.
Well, of course they attack at dawn ... Megatron said so ;)
Blasted typos, argh. I read over it to take out the typos from the first draft but miss all the typoes I put in in the second draft. Bogski.
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Date: 2007-05-08 09:26 pm (UTC)It is an odd sentence, I agree. I'm really not sure what the "dry as memories" bit means. I will revise it should this actually become a story rather than an aggregate of pieces.
Yes. The silence is oppressive, but loud noises mean possibly being shot at, so it's a bit six of one, half a dozen of the other.
Well, of course they attack at dawn ... Megatron said so ;)
Blasted typos, argh. I read over it to take out the typos from the first draft but miss all the typoes I put in in the second draft. Bogski.
Thanks :)