As usual, this is really stunning. Your visuals are always mind-bending. I can FEEL the quiet. The bit about Blue's different scans really highlighted the tension. There was just nothing out there...gave it a really nerve-wracking feel to it.
For some reason I really liked the way Prowl's doors 'click'--THAT was a nice touch, for sure. And the way his optics blaze...even though it is, as you said, too bright for stealth...Heh, 'do as I say and not as I do,' Prowl? =P
And the end was just absolutely priceless. I think after this is over, Jazz is going to just go somewhere and laugh for a day or so. XD
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Date: 2007-05-08 09:52 pm (UTC)As usual, this is really stunning. Your visuals are always mind-bending. I can FEEL the quiet. The bit about Blue's different scans really highlighted the tension. There was just nothing out there...gave it a really nerve-wracking feel to it.
For some reason I really liked the way Prowl's doors 'click'--THAT was a nice touch, for sure. And the way his optics blaze...even though it is, as you said, too bright for stealth...Heh, 'do as I say and not as I do,' Prowl? =P
And the end was just absolutely priceless. I think after this is over, Jazz is going to just go somewhere and laugh for a day or so. XD