Unfinished Fics: #7 - Blood & Diesel

[koilungfish]

Unfinished Fic #7
Blood & Diesel
A motorway pileup causes Optimus Prime to have a nervous breakdown.

Comments

[lunatron.livejournal.com]

Interesting. From the title alone, I would have expected more, er, roadway carnage and less Jesus, but the Jesus idea is pretty interesting.

Granted, I would generally cast Optimus in more of a Moses role, but that is me.

[koilungfish.livejournal.com]

Well, it started with roadway carnage ... if I'd completed it, I probably would've changed the title. I often do. Heck, Army of You started out as Heat Death.

I didn't originally intended to do the temptation parallel thing, it just kinda happened ... by which I mean I didn't consciously choose what I was doing there. Otherwise I would have done something else.

[lunatron.livejournal.com]

Interesting! I usually get a story finished and then stare blankly at it for a while before giving it a title.

Oh, I also liked Tesseract. Random screwed up tortures appeal to me. >_>

[koilungfish.livejournal.com]

I have to come up with a title in order to save the file ...

Rar! I'm not sure what I could have done with him. He was just there :: shrugs ::